Friday, 4 November 2011

Psychosis Full Evaluation

This is not a 'new post' as such, but rather me joining the three evaluation pieces, answering the seven questions. The other posts may stay up, but for ease of marking, and because the posts are separated by other posts I have joined the three evaluation questions.

PART 1: Conventions and Representations (29th March)
This post will address the evaluation questions 'In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?' and 'How does your media product represent particular social groups?'

Firstly does the opening of 'Psychosis' challenge of develop conventions of real media products?
I would argue that in the opening two minutes, it develops conventions rather than challenge them. Both my piece and real films (in the thriller genre) begin with studio logos and some form of action. This particularly follows the Thriller genre as there are very few title credits, unlike an action or a comedy where you would have a 2+ minute animation or title overlay with most of the cast or crew. Many Thrillers will feature only the main actor, title and director, although some films cut straight to the action after the studio logos.  For instance, in the opening of 'Inception', the studio logos are the very first thing you see. This is followed by the action.  A similarity between my film and Inception is that it involves the mind. In 'Psychosis' the character of Nicolas is remembering the events of his fiancée's death, while in Inception it is a dream sequence where Leonardo Di Caprio's character is trying to extract dreams. In the 'Dark Knight' the film opens with the main antagonist committing a bank heist, which is similar to what happens in 'Psychosis', although this is seen from the police perspective rather than the antagonists. As well as this the 'Dark Knight' heist serves little purpose other than introducing the Joker, whereas in 'Psychosis', this is the event which leads to the protagonist’s condition/psychosis.
Another thriller film which opened recently is 'Shutter Island'. This opened with its main character in the middle of the action, on a boat ride to a psychiatric hospital. All three examples set up enigma codes, as does 'Psychosis', while introducing the main protagonists.
The difference between how our films start is that 'Psychosis' focuses on character and narrative, and while the others do this, the opening features lots of unanswered questions, or enigma codes. Some of these enigma codes include: What was Roy’s motive? Where did Jane work? How much time has passed between Jane's death and the meeting with the psychiatrist? These enigma codes would be answered within the main piece, and more would be asked within the main body of the film. Not all of the questions would be answered as many Thrillersleave some to make the audience think ('Inception's' finale, where it questions whether the protagonist is in a dream or not, or what parts of the film were actually set in reality, with websites created dedicated to answering that question).

There are also some action codes. We discover the relationship's between the introduced protagonists, and to some extent what they are like as people. Another action code is what happens to Jane, and who is responsible for it, which again set's up the characters and their relationships to each other. Like most Thrillers, more enigma code's are set up than answered.
The technical codes used within the opening two minutes are also often used within Thriller films. For instance, I use non-diegetic background music to build up tension, something common in films like 'Inception', which will some of their scores as motif's, so the audience know when a distinct event will happen. Examples in other genres of motifs include 'The Imperial March' in 'Star Wars' and 'Shark motif' in Jaws. The use of dialogue is used heavily rather than action, common in Thriller films, and sound effects replace set pieces. For instance, if it was an action film, having Nicolas and DCI Howard talk would be considered 'boring' and the camera may cut inside to see Roy getting into a shoot-out with the officers. However, this does not build up tension, something key in Thriller films.

The shot types and edits are common with dialogues, although I used a two shot throughout rather than Shot-Reverse-Shot, unless it could not be helped, such as the phone conversations. The reason I did this was so that we could see each character's reaction and gauge their mood or thoughts within each film. Other shots were used to demonstrate power within the film. For instance, Roy was filmed at lower angles to show that he has power over Nicolas by holding Jane hostage.
The mise-en-scene is typical of office buildings, such as the police station interior and the building exterior. By having a more realistic look to the buildings, it grounds the audience and tells them that this could happen, rather than being a representation of parallel world or a future time. The props and costumes are also very important in showing that this is a realistic world. Very few props are used but all have a purpose, such as giving the office a realistic and lived in presence.
 Character and clothing within my piece and real examples are similar, for instance Dom Cobb in 'Inception' compared to Nicolas in 'Psychosis'
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 Both are wearing suits, although what Nicolas is wearing is more casual. It should be said that he is a plain clothed officer much like this picture of an officer in 'the Bill'
 The actor (DJ Scott Mills) is wearing smart clothing but not full uniform.



The other question I am answering in this part of the evaluation is the representations.
The characters I show are a thief/murderer, two police officers and a female worker. I tried not to play into stereotypical roles, although 'DCI Howard' is seen as more of an experienced character, who plays 'by the rules', with Nicolas being more reckless and driven by his emotion. The character of Roy is seen as quite 'heartless', however, from the response I've had back, the way Ryan plays Roy has made him the most popular character in the piece. He is not the usual villain seen in these types of film, rather than a stereotypical cockney gangster, which would normally be the type of character seen pulling off heist's in crime films, he appears quite level headed and following some sort of plan. Although Jane gets least screen time, she appears as quite calm, considering the circumstance, possibly as she believes that Nicolas will save her.
I feel that these characters are acting as they would in these situations, and in some places this helped create a more real piece, and although some sections seemed more faked by the acting, some parts were also enhanced by the way the characters are being played. The character types follow typical Thriller films, as there is normally a male protagonist (Nicolas), a mysterious female, often dies within the film as some sort of test or as a main part of the narrative (Jane), and an antagonist with a plot more than 'taking over the world' or 'money' (Roy). DCI Howard is presented as an Antihero, trying to help Nicolas as much as possible but hindering him when Nicolas stops following the 'rules'.
The opening to Psychosis also follows the typical narrative structure of films. For instance, we meet the hero, and the agent of change, which causes the disequilibrium. We see at the end of the opening 2 minutes the aftermath of the disequilibrium, but do not know the hero's quest, although because we are familiar with the Thriller conventions we can give an assumption, and we know that it will relate to the events within the opening.

PART 2: Institutions and audience (31st March)


This part of the evaluation will address: 'What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?', 'Who would be the audience for your media product?' and 'How did you attract your audience?'

Firstly the type of media institution that would distribute my film. It is a British film, which relies on character and narrative rather than effects. Therefore I felt that it would be distributed by an Indie company, which is what I envisioned BlackJack Films to be. Either that or a subsidy of a major company.

Now onto the audience. Thriller films tend to be aimed at both genders; however from my market research I discovered men prefer them. They also tend to be between 15 and 25. Therefore I tried to create an opening that would appeal to both genders, but mainly males under 25. The full feature would likely include things for this audience, such as a new romance (for the female audience), with someone deemed to be attractive to men. This would attract my target audience.
Although much of my feedback was positive, it was the guys who mainly praised the narrative I had set up.

Other ways in which I would attract my target audience are:
The use of stars (in the full feature) may attract the target audience, as they prefer younger stars, because they are more relatable.
I also used action to attract my target audience, as this is popular with males of all ages. Creating intrigue would hook the audience, and one of the main reasons people see films like Shutter Island or Inception is to have their own unique take on the narrative. I hope that there are different theories as to why a dead person is shown at the end of the opening two minutes, and maybe other questions would be raised in the full feature (the disequilibrium and the enigma codes). From my research this is the part of the film that people like in thrillers, the twists and the not-so-obvious plot-line, as although the film itself is entertaining, trying to second-guess or come up with your own conclusion add to this and why people tend to avoid spoilers.

PART 3: Technology and Preliminary

This section will focus on the final two evaluation questions: 'What have you learnt about technologies from the process of creating this product?' and 'Looking back what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from your preliminary task to the full product?'

The technologies I used were:
iMovie
iMac
JVC Mini-DV camcorder

iMovie was used for the majority of editing, because of its ease of use. Unlike the original submission, no editing needed to be done on Final Cut, as Matt and Brendan were available to shoot at the same time, meaning I could use a two shot rather than shot reverse shot.
The camera is not new, but uses tapes and has a fire wire port, which meant it could be imported straight onto the Mac, a problem we had to try and overcome with the original submission, which led to a dramatic loss of quality. As well as this, all the filming was done on one day, meaning all the actors were available and in costume, and so the shots could be simpler and less editing would be required to give the illusion that actors were in the same location. One problem that was picked up on was a few shots seemed 'shaky', which is due to a lack of tri-pods being available at the time of the shoot, although the people that noticed this said that it wasn't very noticeable. Another problem I could have had was seagulls over the top of the Nicolas/Howard speech, however any rerecorded audio would have been noticeable, as was proven in my original submission. Overall it did not matter whether they were included because the noise is only a few seconds and both actors can be heard over it. Any problems I did have I managed to overcome within the time limit.

Now onto the progression from preliminary to final coursework piece.
Many things are different in the two pieces. The preliminary was set in two locations, and although the second location (classroom/office) is fine, the outer corridor has a slight drop in quality which affected some of the outside shooting in the final piece. Also the final piece was not only filmed in more locations, but outside, meaning that the weather was an extra factor.
Although the use of actors wasn't a problem in the preliminary (all students in my media class), the final piece was made difficult because the location I used meant I could only film during school hours, and not every location was free/person was available. In the end I managed to find a convenient time for all the actors.
Finally there was the type of camera used. In my preliminary, I used a tape camcorder from the school, which meant that it was easier to import images etc. onto the macs to edit. For my final piece, I used my own camera, so I was not waiting around for school cameras to become available. Both used tapes and had the same connectivity, meaning that the import process was simple. There are more edits and the addition of an extra audio layer in the final coursework piece, however I believe I got the balance between music and dialogue levels correct
In summary, I believe that both shoots went well, although there was more of a problem involving availability in the final piece. The preliminary task definitely helped when it came to editing the final piece, as did learning from the mistakes made during my first submission.

Sunday, 23 October 2011

PSYCHOSIS Coursework (latest and Final Version)

Here is the opening 2 minutes of 'Psychosis', a thriller. Before I post the video these are the people who worked on the piece:
Actors:
Catherine Dawson (Jane)
Ryan Griffiths (Roy/Murderer)
Brendan Read (Nicolas Johnson)
Matt Finch (DCI Howard)
Will Driver (Psychiatrist)



Director/Editor: Will Driver 
The music I found was from a royalty free website: http://www.incompetech.com/m/c/royalty-free/
To the best of my knowledge Kevin MacLeod wrote the piece within the video, named 'Interloper'
. This is the completed video 

  


The music was found with a quick search for 'royalty free music'. The piece adds to the suspense of the scene' The opening titles are reminiscent of many recent films particularly thrillers, simply listing the director/creator, as well as possibly a major actor in it (Brendan Read). 
I imagined 'BlackJack Films' to be a British Indie film company, or a subsidiary of a major company such as Sony or Universal.
I decided to just have a voice-over during the credits, partly for effect, so that the audience is straight in with the flashback, but also for time reasons.
The flashback is firstly a midshot of Nicolas in an office, and gives the illusion that Nicolas is a high ranking officer (he wears formal attire rather than uniform which confirms this), and that he is busy doing paperwork (in fact his script). 
The Shot-Reverse-Shot between Nicolas and Jane had to be filmed in different locations of the same building. I had Jane stand beside a blank wall to cover any evidence we could be in a building other than a bank (although her place of work is only hinted at during the opening, as Roy is trying to steal money). The tone at the end of the conversation was originally meant to be a scream, but I felt it would be more dramatic to have the tone. 
The conversation between Nicolas and his superior DCI Howard is against a wall for a few reasons. Firstly, it is the same reason as having Jane behind a blank wall, we are not giving away that we aren't at a certain location, and secondly if I needed to cut between different takes and they had moved, it would be less noticeable as a continuity error.
I decided to stick with a two shot rather than use different editing effects like a shot reverse shot, partly because they were in the same location but also because having a showing a conversation like this means that the audience is more likely to be focussed on the dialogue. Unfortunately the seagull noise could not be edited out, and new audio could not be used without messing up the lip-sync or sounding like it was a separate recording. I use a zoom before cutting to Nicolas' conversation in order to show something is about to happen. As well as this, the music begins, building up the suspense.
We cut between Roy and Nicolas at this point and I use a shot reverse shot at this point to introduce the antagonist. We do not see Jane in the shot, because I felt that we needed to see how Roy reacts during the conversation, making him a more villainous character. 
I have the gunshots cut DCI Howard off as a sort of irony, that they are discovered as he is singing their praises. It also made more sense to have it during that part of the conversation, as otherwise it may not have been relevant.
The second conversation with Roy does little other than to show his character, and to prove that he was the one that killed them, not the officers apprehending him.
Originally the scenes in the present involved Nicolas reading a copy of the local paper, but this looked to faked, and the addition of a psychiatrist shows that the character has been affected by his loss, and sets up the quest (the disequilibrium being Jane's death).



Much of the feedback I have received is positive, with people citing that it was better than my original effort in terms of quality and narrative. One criticism I got was that some of the shots looked 'shaky' due to having no tripods available at time of filming, and the camera type I used (although it was admitted at this was probably not my fault, and that the quality is the same as what the person did at college)


Examples of feedback:
  • "i liked it how if you like Cat put great effort into the role 
    i think everyone did well" James Parnell (layman feedback)
"yeah its good im liking the acting" Alexis Mitchell (layman feedback)



"i think its good! its for media im guessing? maybe next time use a tripod if the sixth forms got one because some of the shots are abit shaky and were told at college not to hold the cameras when were filming" Rebecca Randall expert feedback (film studies student at Suffolk college)
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Could do with better cameras and microphones but I imagine that's not your fault! Titles at start a bit quick.Bar that it looks almost exactly like the college stuff I made when I was 16/17 so you're on the right track, if you considerwhat I make these days to be where the track should end up!" @ now @RalphTrombone

on Twitter. Expert feedback (Studied BA (Hons) TV & Film Production at the University Of Portsmouth.)

Sunday, 3 April 2011

The props and costumes of Psychosis

These are the costumes and props I used during Psychosis, and why they were used. Some have been shown before (either in evaluation or separate posts) but I don't think I've put everything in one post.
List of costumes:
Shirts and trousers for Howard and Nicolas (usual non-uniformed attire for officers). The psychiatrist also wears smart clothing

Smart-casual clothing for Jane for Jane




More casual clothing for Roy


The costumes are likely to be worn by the real life counterparts. Ryan had more freedom with his costume, although because he is not a common criminal he would not be seen wearing jeans and a hoodie.
The props are not as symbolic, although they do have purpose.
The computers/Macs show busy offices and hard work, as do the files in the psychiatrists office.
The mobiles are used to communicate rather than landlines, partly because of the time the film is set, and also it would be the first place a person like Janet would try. 

Psychosis Original Cut and original coursework piece (Previous Versions)

Here are two different cuts to the final piece I uploaded a few days ago. The first is the original cut, which was originally going to be used to help the original musician with the music. Unfortunately the music wasnt ready within time, so I had to use the royalty free music. The main difference (apart from lack of titles), is the different actor for Howard and the location. The location changed because it would have caused a massive continuity error, and the original actor, James Parnell, was unavailable for the reshoots, so Matt took his place. The end scene was also added in, to create suspense and a cliff hanger.




The second is the original piece I submitted as coursework. It differs a lot from the resubmission, partly because there the part of the psychiatrist is now a newspaper, and the quality is poor, due to the camera I used not being Mac compatible, and so the quality was lost in the conversion process. Some actors couldn't attend the re-shoots for various reasons, and some of the sound had to be re-dubbed.

People who have seen both versions have stated how much everything has improved in the new version.

Wednesday, 30 March 2011

PSYCHOSIS storyboard

Something else I had not been able to post before now is the scanned versions of my original story board. Some parts were left out due to time constraints (the car), others switched around (titles at the beginning of the 2 minutes rather than the end)

 

Sunday, 27 March 2011

Research Findings

Only just realised I had not put this up.
Firstly, my questionnaire results, out of 10 people.
I asked Four main things, as well as some open questions. The closed questions were 'Age/Gender (The target audience was males in their late teens/ early twenties but I got a range) as well as each participants favourite genres and their thoughts on thriller films. Open questions were 'Favourite Actor, Favourite Director, Favourite Film, the best part of the film experience'. Most of the participants in the survey said they preferred Thriller films to other genres, although there was positive reactions to other genres like Action and Comedy. Many said they would see a film after watching a trailer, although it helped if they knew the actors or director, showing that there is still 'star power' within Hollywood.

Secondly was the independent research I conducted.
From the openings of various films (written up here are 'Pretty Woman', 'Dodgeball', 'Layer Cake' and 'Silence of the Lambs', but there are others) I have learned that the openings of films must introduce at least two things: character and plot. Thriller films like Silence of the Lambs, but also films like Inception and Shutter Island tension and suspense should be created. This is important, because the film I wish to create should focus on the protagonist's journey, and so both character and plot are equally important, however suspense must be built as it's a thriller.

I used 'Dawn of the Dead' remake and Four Lions as a comparison of opening titles, and decided to go for an in-between. keeping it short like 'Four Lions' but having text over black like in 'Dawn of the Dead'. I felt that this, coupled with opening music creates tension but the length allows me to get straight into the action without it being interrupted by the titles.

Finally the narrative structure. The equilibrium and disequilibrium will be addressed in the opening (the protagonists life with his fiancée and her death) with the rest of the film being the quest (trying to forgive himself and stop the visions of her). The agent of change would be the killer, and the return to normality would be when the protagonist forgives himself and the killer is caught.

Monday, 21 March 2011

'Psychosis' Classification

Looking on the BBFC website, and researching modern thriller films (Scorese, Nolan). The majority of these are either 12 of 15 certificate. Examples include:
Inception


Shutter Island


Memento

Any bold text below (12/15 certified descriptions) shows content likely to be seen if 'Psychosis' were a full feature (only the 'oldest' will be in bold, ie a 15 may be in bold but not the 12 counterpart):
The BBFC description for a 12/12A film is
"Aggressive discriminatory language or behaviour is unlikely to be acceptable unless clearly condemned"
"Any misuse of drugs must be infrequent and should not be glamorised or give instructional detail"
"Moderate physical and psychological threat may be permitted, provided disturbing sequences are not frequent or sustained."
"Dangerous behaviour (for example, hanging, suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on detail which could be copied, or appear pain or harm free."
"Moderate language is allowed. The use of strong language (for example, ‘f*ck’) must be infrequent"
"Nudity is allowed, but in a sexual context must be brief and discreet."
"Sexual activity may be briefly and discreetly portrayed. Sex references should not go beyond what is suitable for young teenagers"
"Mature themes are acceptable, but their treatment must be suitable for young teenagers"
"Moderate violence is allowed but should not dwell on detail. There should be no emphasis on injuries or blood, but occasional gory moments may be permitted if justified by the context."


And a 15 on the BBFC website constitutes as: 
"The work as a whole must not endorse discriminatory language or behaviour."
"Drug taking may be shown but the film as a whole must not promote or encourage drug misuse. The misuse of easily accessible and highly dangerous substances (for example, aerosols or solvents) is unlikely to be acceptable."
"Strong threat and menace are permitted unless sadistic or sexualised."
"Dangerous behaviour (for example, hanging, suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on detail which could be copied. Easily accessible weapons should not be glamorised."
"There may be frequent use of strong language (for example, ‘f*ck’). The strongest terms may be acceptable if justified by the context. Aggressive or repeated use of the strongest language is unlikely to be acceptable."
"Nudity may be allowed in a sexual context but without strong detail."
"Sexual activity may be portrayed without strong detail. There may be strong verbal references to sexual behaviour, but the strongest references are unlikely  to be acceptable unless justified by context."
"No theme is prohibited"
"Violence may be strong but should not dwell on the infliction of pain or injury. The strongest gory images are unlikely to be acceptable. Strong sadistic or sexualised violence is also unlikely to be acceptable."


All descriptions gathered from the relevant page on the BBFC website.


Although it would likely feature would feature elements from a 12 film (language, drug use, sex/ sex references) or below (no nudity), certain elements would raise the film to a 15 (threat, violence, 'dangerous behaviour'), if the full feature were to be rated by the BBFC.

Sunday, 20 March 2011

Audience Research

All Film's have a target audience, and conventions are followed within the film to make sure the target audience are satisfied. Romantic films, for instance, will normally target women aged between 25 and 40, and is normally told from a female perspective.
However, genre's like comedies and thrillers are more diverse, often targeting multiple genders and age groups. However, recently thriller's have tried to target a younger audience, with films like the Dark Knight and Inception. I believe that the main target audience for a thriller film are males aged 16-25, and so this is the audience I am targeting with my film.

Although I will use the conventions of thriller films in my piece, I also need to research my Target Audience, to see which conventions they want to see more within my piece

Monday, 14 March 2011

Film Publishing company intro

The intro to film company 'BlackJack Films' which would go before 'Psychosis'. Animation by James Parnell, based upon my original concept. Most film distributors and production companies would put original and memorable intros to associate the company with the film. The exceptions are films which are supposedly 'found footage' like the Blair witch project and Paranormal Activity.

Thursday, 3 March 2011

Film Logo

After deciding on the name 'Psychosis' I decided to create a logo, which would appear on all marketing products. I did an original design, but also did two variations:
This is the logo i settled on. It shows some kind of disturbance as there is a mirror image of the title, which looks like it has been cut out.
This is the all red logo, which looks like the top layer has been placed over the background before the word is 'cut'. could be used for various marketing pieces. 
Madness logo, which appears to have the letters disappearing, corresponding to the sanity of the protagonist throughout the film. It could be blood over the letters, representing death.
It is normal for the logo to appear on the film itself, within the opening credits, although sometimes if other credits are used in traditional font, the title name may be in the same style. If this is the case, the logo would be seen at the end of the credits. Some films like Inception, use neither, going straight into the film after the studio logos, and uses plain text straight after the film finishes, without it's logo being seen at all during the film

Film Opening Name

The Johnson Conspiracy – Similarities to Bourne films, talks of other motives for death
The Man in Blue – Refers to fact protagonist being policeman
Blazing Blue – Same as above, seemingly more action
Vengeance – Main theme of film, already Danny Trejo film from 2010/2011 named this
Seeking Vengeance – Same concept as above
Best Served Cold – From phrase ‘revenge is a dish best served cold’

Psychosis (from the Greek ψυχή "psyche", for mind/soul, and -ωσις "-osis", for abnormal condition) means abnormal condition of the mind, and is a generic psychiatric term for a mental state often described as involving a "loss of contact with reality". People suffering from psychosis are described as psychotic. Psychosis is given to the more severe forms of psychiatric disorder, during which hallucinations and delusions and impaired insight may occur

Apparition


Paranoia: Being paranoid means being suspicious without reason, and believing that others are trying to harm you in some way. Everyone can be mistrustful at times, particularly if life hasn't treated him or her well. But people who are prone to paranoia always dread some forthcoming attack or betrayal. They are forever anticipating that something awful will happen, and trying to second-guess what their adversaries might do. They focus on their fears for the future, and take little account of the majority of times when the past has proved them wrong.


Mania



Psychosis has been chosen as the film title, or at least working title. This works as most thriller film titles relate to an event or person within the film. For instance, Inception is about the idea of Inception (placing an idea in the mind, literally a safe), The Dark Knight and Terminator 2 are the names of the protagonists (Terminator 2's subtitle, Judgement Day, refers to a supposed event within the film, which John Connor and the title character manage to stop.) and Psycho refers to Norman Bates. Psychosis, means having a condition of the mind, something the protagonist goes through after a traumatic experience, and hopes to cure by the narratives end. 

Monday, 7 February 2011

Film Opening: Script


Over Black.
Psychiatrist: Look, I’ll try and help, because you’re a colleague, but it would be better for a neutral party to treat you. Are you sure you are comfortable here
Nicolas: Yes, its fine, what do I need to do.
Psychiatrist: Why not start at the beginning.

Int. Office. Day. We hear a phone ringing, while Nicolas from the first scene is working.
Nicolas: DI Johnson.
Jane (hiding, panicked): Nick, this man he’s got a gun he’s holding us hostage. I got away but he won’t go without the money.
Nicolas: Does anyone know?
Jane: There wasn’t time to sound the..... Oh no! (Static, screaming, muffled noises e.g. don’t touch me)
Nicolas: Jane!

Shot outside building.  Nicolas walks to superior hurriedly.
Nicolas: Any Progress?
Howard: We have nothing on him. No name, no car, no fingerprints.
Nicolas: I need to go in, I trained for negotiations.
Howard: No, not until the SWAT team arrives.
Nicolas: You can’t be serious.
Howard: We don’t know what sort of man this is, and if we don’t... (Nicolas’ phone rings)
Roy calm well spoken: Mr Johnson, I felt like this is the right time to speak.
Nicolas: Who are you?
Roy: I’m not in the mood to play games, and I do not want to harm this woman, but I will not hesitate if my demands are not met.
Nicolas: Which are?
Roy: Firstly call everybody off; I do not want to see any sign of a police officer within 5 miles of this place. This includes you. If this happens I will let her go. If I anybody hinders my escape I will kill them all.
Nicolas: How can I believe you?
Roy: I am a man of my word, and for her sake I hope she is as well. Phone goes dead.
Howard: We sent two officers in to apprehend the man, good job distracting him.
Nicolas: You idiot! He’s going to kill all three of them now!
Howard: Don’t worry, they’re top…
Three gunshots are heard.
The phone rings again.
Roy: I told you not to test me, now these peoples blood are on your conscience.
Cut back to the café.
Psychiatrist: I read the report, Officer Williams and Phillips were lucky to have survived. I’m sorry about Jane, but I needed to see your reaction to it. I’ll need to see you again, but for how long I don’t know.

Cut to Nicolas walking down a street.


It is likely lines will be cut or edited in the final piece

Sunday, 30 January 2011

Film Opening idea: Synopsis

The film would start with a bank heist/ hostage situation, followed by police officers entering after them. The lead character  (Nicolas) tries to diffuse the situation, but it ends with the murder of his fiancé. He struggles to get on with his life, blaming himself for her death. This manifests in various ways, but the most common one is visions of her.
Another case comes up involving her killer, and Nicolas must try to put his past behind him, rather than go out for revenge. He ends up getting sidelined for personal reasons, but goes after them using methods he couldn't legally do as an officer. He kills his wife's killer in a raid, and manages to forgive himself, the visions stopping

Friday, 7 January 2011

Media opening film ideas

These may not end up being the final edit, but some ideas so far:
A Slacker film: guy loses something and has to get it back
A zombie film, which takes places a few months after the initial outbreak, focussing on a small group of survivors and their quest to safety.
A gang film, where a teen who witnesses the death of a friend decides to take revenge on the youths who did it.
A Cop film, where an officer has to solve a case, despite memories of his fallen wife, who he saw die in a hostage situation.

The first idea would be an action-comedy, the second a horror/thriller and the 3rd and 4th would be psychological thrillers